I fell like I am in a nightmare
And people around hardly seem to care
It seems just yesterday that dad was here
We were all happy and had no fear
But now even If I search everywhere
I'll not find him anywhere
Because he is gone, gone forever...
Irritation, anger and frustration; it's all I feel
Hoping that this pain in my heart will soon heal
Concentration and study now does not get in my head
All I feel like doing is sit and cry on his bed
Office is fine, as my most wonderful freinds
keep me smiling all the time
The moment I am back at home , realization dawns on me
That it is without my father I have to be
Everthing seems wrong
But I hold myself strong
Though he is forever gone
I look at my mother
And realize that life has to go on.......
Life always must go on...but death often stops life in its tracks. Your poem is very strong, very touching.
ReplyDeleteThank you J.R Nova,I just tried to express my feelings in words...
DeleteLife definitely must go on, but it is tough. Thank you for your touching words.
ReplyDeleteYes It is too tough But i have learned how to survive...
DeleteThank Yoy Rachel Hoyt
Very nice. Very sad. A little awkward on the rhythm and I saw a type or two but then those are the things I see when I read. Sharing this. It's worth it. You keep writing. I'm sure you will go far.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anna for encouraging me...I will write more because I have to move on without him...
DeleteThis is a wonderful piece. Very raw and full of true emotions, keep writing it helps the healing process. You will always miss him and you will get angry but your love is evident in your words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jan...Somewhere in my heart I love him a lot....
Deleteno words, i can just say i am always there to support and share and encourage you to carry on with life. remember your dad is always there watching you from above. make him feel proud. work hard.
ReplyDeletethanks sancheeta I knw you will alwys there for me...Thank You for supporting me....
DeleteIt is quite hard to come into terms with death but then life has to go on. Quite poignant. Life will go on.
ReplyDeleteBest,
Susan
P. S: Some fonts are not visible due to the colour contrast. It would be great if you could alter them.
Thank You Susan, Very soon I will alter them...Thanking for reading
DeleteWhat is life? but the certainty of death! Live it the best you can and have fun.. Think of the great stuff your dad did and all is good mate
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Thank You & I alwys remember wat my dad had done for me....
Deleteall your feelings are really touchy ,good creation.from different sector of your life you will be inspire ....gohead...
ReplyDeleteThank You Sumisti After a long time You again encouraged me....thanks a lot once again
Deletetouching piece.. very well written and very emotionl too
ReplyDeleteThank You Saher....:)
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